Father Time

In: Tales

17 Jun 2006 5:20 pm

You are there, I see, tangible, a moss of fluffy clouds and pink bunnies and a rabid annoyance that is the pimple on your dimple. Haha, it rhymes.

If only, and if only you’d get up. Lying there on the immortalised white bedsheet with a splinter of sorrow etched on your face, you are a wreck. I said it, you are a complete wreck.

With tubes and wires slicing into every vein of yours, your fa?ade changes with every passing day. The beautiful tender skin of yours, I caress you softly, I coo corny songs, I sit on my knees as your eternal slave. For you, I’d die…

I kneel there for millennia as the sun sets and rises for a billion times, as I’ve seen every passing season, every torrential wind, every heartbreaking disaster inflicted on your mortal body.

Why am I immortal when you are not..?

I’ve forgotten how your face once look like, serene and gorgeously beautiful, when the birds chirped to herald mornings instead of vultures squawking to invite deaths. I’ve forgotten how you and I were once intangible, a dream within a dream, a livelihood lovers would dream of.

I’ve forgotten how you and I would hold hands - the warmth in your hands I missed dearly - and watch each passing day together. I’ve forgotten how the sparkling spring water tasted, how we’d picnic under the tallest oak without fear, how we’d gently kiss as man and wife.

I’ve forgotten, my dear, that you were once the great Mother Nature, and I was once the invincible Father Time.

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Random story I cooked up. Need to sharpen me writing skills for the upcoming English Placement Test in like 34 hours time!!

And, like, zomg, my new freshman life, new college life begins in 33 hours.

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Saki UNITED STATES

June 18th, 2006 at 4:01 am

...

That was..

Brilliant. ♥

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clem MALAYSIA

June 18th, 2006 at 4:41 am

Thanks!

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kaitzin MALAYSIA

June 18th, 2006 at 1:29 pm

chun ar~

are u that worry about english placement test?
i had it in MMU here, via pc/internet and it was just a test with common comprehension and vocabulary.
but i found a number of words-i-dont-know though.

lol.

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Stephanie MALAYSIA

June 18th, 2006 at 3:48 pm

The story is GOOD. Love the last line ”...Mother Nature… Father Time.”Nice story, very different from the usual sappy, lovesick, emotional posts on blogs belonging to hormonally-imbalanced teenagers. Er.. Not that you are one.

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clem MALAYSIA

June 18th, 2006 at 6:34 pm

kaitzin: Hoho, I’m not that worried actually, just well, fear of the unknown cause dunno the format of the test and all. I worry for Andy more lol.

Sounds pretty easy from what you said.. no essays to write? I HAVE TO WAKE UP IN LIKE 4 HOURS TIME AND I LIKE, JUST GOT BACK FROM HOMEEE.. when I’m back I’ll post some Leehom-related videos for you XD Not clear lor though.. since sit so far T___T

Stephanie: Thanks!! =D It was a really random story, started off with the first few lines, then the rest of the story just came into place.. much like how most of my essays in SPM and all were done. No thoughts given at all, just start writing. :p

Yeah, most of the teens’ blogs these days are so hormonally-influnced, which is why I tend to stay away from them. To be fair, I once had such posts before, but I tend to keep ‘em low. =)

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kaitzin MALAYSIA

June 18th, 2006 at 11:40 pm

yea, no essay writing…my test la~cuz we were using computer to do the test. i dont know about yours. O__O

ZZZZZZOOOOMMGGG….aww..that’s kind of u. lol. NVRM…put otha english songs, leehom’s no need. XD

anyway, jia you jia you!!! >.

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clem MALAYSIA

June 19th, 2006 at 2:56 pm

Thanks!! :P Enjoy the vids too.. =)

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